Sunday 17 May 2015

Creative Writing - The Flaming Sword

   The Flaming SWORD
                   By David Botelho

        One boring stormy night there was an island called Flames, it was a good looking island with some waterfalls. And on that island was two people on a quest to find a flaming sword, their names were Bob and Josh. While they were hiking up the mountain  they saw two glowing tunnels one the left one on the right,Josh wanted to go left but Bob forced him to go right.

Josh thought they were doomed but they weren't after that  Bob spotted a dirty swamp. Bob told Josh to get the raft. It was an amazing looking raft with a rocket ship, alien and flame stickers on it. It was to bad the swamp was dirty.After rowing for a couple of hours they fell asleep and fell out of the raft.

But it turned out the swamp was only 118cm so Bob and Josh just swam to shore on shore they found a secret passage. In the passage they found they saw two choices one a bag with a million dollars the other a flaming sword Bob and Josh didn't know what to do but they took the flaming sword.
After twenty minutes their dad found out he knew where they were it took like ten minutes to get to museum that Bob and


Josh hated so much they wanted to destroy it but their dad was too smart because he was already ready to sneak attack
he jumped down and grounded them until they were 40 years old. They started crying cause they weren't allowed to play video games any more and they lived happily ever after.

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