Tuesday, 12 May 2015

Creative Writing - Over the Mountain

Over the Mountain
By Lachlan Gavin

I am learning to entertain my audience.  

“Its just rabble, it’s all rabble!” Exclaimed Theo. Theo was devastated by the amount of damage Fear the dragon did with his hot lava like breath. The only people alive were Theo and May, they have never gotten along. But to kill the dragon they would have to work together. Theo nervously walked over to the blacksmith and found a bow and a couple of arrows. May found a bronze sword and food so off they went to start their quest.


As they started May asked, “do you know where you're going or are we lost?” Theo replied, “ I think we should stop at the murky river,” About half an hour later they stopped at the murky river but something bad happened someone had died but they had to carry on. The journey was long and to the birthplace of Fear May and Theo stopped along they met a poor man who was a friend of a blacksmith to make them some armor but the blacksmith said “I know a place you could get a horse to help you on your quest”. The travel was dangerous they had to cross Death Bridge, Spooky Valley and go through Devil Domain. Theo saw a baby dragon and hit it with an arrow. May told Theo, “the stars are coming up we should make camp here to sleep.       


In the morning Theo got up at dawn to catch some food. May woke up at 7:00am which was around the time Theo had cooked the food which was an eagle and fox with butter it was delicious. Suddenly it started to rain heavily so they took a shortcut through the spikey forest. Theo saw that the mountain in the village where Fear was born.      

May looked down at a piece of rope on the muddy ground, May look at Theo and said, “Theo stop were at Death Bridge.” But Theo didn't stop and the rope started to unravel a plank snapped and jolted Theo painfully but he made it across! May started to cross when she slipped but got hold of a perfectly new plank, pulled herself up and made it across. Theo and May walked on they got to the terrifying spooky valley the most mossiest, and most misty place ever. They tried to run but the moss was alive and grabbing them! The moss had a tight grip on May but with a swing of her sword she cut her way to freedom and Theo managed to get but was very angry, “May why didn’t you help me?” May said nothing as they didn’t talk until they got to Devil Domain so they started to climb up the Domain and up the mountain to slay the dragon.     

At the top they saw Fear sleeping. But the most odd thing was he had a saddle on his back. Later a tall man in dark clothes walked out at a furious pace and didn’t notice May and Theo. Just as he was starting to wake the dragon the man spotted Theo looking through the woven flax basket when Theo looked up the man was stained in front of him His scarf blowing in the freezing air. The man started to talk to Theo he said, “My name is Adam.” Adam was apparently the owner of Fear the dragon. May came out of the cave that Adam lives in and got a shock when she saw Adam. They looked at each other, May pulled out her shiny bronze sword Adam pulled out a dim dragon blood sword. They ran at each other with a swing of Adam's sword he split May’s sword in half then Theo jumped out of nowhere and kicked Adam off the mountain, May found Adam’s sword she ran up to the dragon and cut its head off!.


The end       

Monday, 11 May 2015

Creative Writing - Mr Man and the Mysterious Chair


Mr Man and the Mysterious Chairs

By Ethan Gaoa

Mr Man is a man who is all about perfection, he doesn’t do what other people do, all he does is stay inside, tidy up his whole house and tend to his garden. But one day while Mr Man was outside looking at all of his  beautiful plants in his garden,he saw something very unexpected, it was an old fashioned chair.

He felt kind of weird because the chair wasn’t there yesterday? So who had given it to him he thought, who had returned it?  After he had finished looking at his plants he was so tired that he decided to have a cosy tester on the chair, but as soon as he sat down... He felt the chair suddenly whisk him away into a different country on a way different chair.

He tried to figure out where he was and finally some people from the country came up to him and asked in a different language what he was doing, and then he guessed by their accents that he was in Paris.  But then ...  suddenly he was whisked away again to another country, but this time he knew what country it was because he had been here before on a holiday and the country was New Zealand.

But when he thought about it he thought he would get whisked away like last time. So he thought New Zealand over and over again so he never left the country and he was stuck on the chair forever. The End                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  

Sunday, 10 May 2015

Creative Writing - Mr Linden's Library

Mr Linden’s Library
by Lucy k
May 2015
I am learning to entertain my audience


There was once a simple old man called Liam Linden, who owned a library. There is Bella Wright who was a young teenager and a boy called Tom Asher who was energetic and curious. Tom was 10, Bella was 13 and Mr Linden was 87.

One day a girl called Bella Wright went in for a book, while she was wandering around she noticed a book hidden behind the shelf she brought it to the counter and said “can i please get these book out? Mr Linden said “Are you sure you would like to get this book out?”, “yes i’m sure”. When night fell, slowly but quietly the book took over her mind
and body.

When she woke up she returned the book but instead of shelving it Mr Linden got rid of it The next night Mr Linden mysteriously died. A boy called Tom Asher discovered the book, he found out what happened to Bella and that she had turned evil and wanted to help, but no one was about to help him, so he went to find Bella, when he found her she was inside a ruined old house, the walls were crumbling bit by bit with a layer of  vine’s that were growing off the house.

It was certainly very creepy, finally he plucked up enough courage and went to knock on the door… Slowly the door creaked open and there she stood like a demon in your worst nightmare!! Her hair was like a birds nest, her clothes were ripped and like rags. She looked HORRIBLE, Tom was terrified, so he ran inside as fast as he had ever gone, he felt like he was flying… Until suddenly he stopped, turned around and yelled out...

STOP, I WANT TO HELP YOU!


She stopped and looked at him and he asked why are you doing this to people what happened to you, do you know where the book went. Um yes i do know what happened to the book. But it will be no
use to you. Mr linden hid it. But i know how to help you it
said in the book we need to get you to the library to find the
book and what we need to fix you.

WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO BELLA WRIGHT?
WILL SHE CARRY ONE BEING EVIL?
WILL SHE BE FIXED?
WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT???

Saturday, 9 May 2015

Creative Writing - The Return of the Stone

The Return of the Stone.
By Seth McGlynn
I am learning to entertain my audience.                                  

One spooky day, there was a boy and a girl who were so bored of doing nothing, they decided to head down to the spooky lake.

They were walking on top of the flat stones, crunch, crunch, crunch,  listening to the stones crunching together under their feet.  Finally they arrived at the lake.  Both of them looking forward towards the lake looking  through the blurry mist of fog.

Both of them picked up a rock, the rock dull in colour, smooth, small enough to fit perfectly in their hands.  Pulling their arm back and threw the rock, skipping it across the  still water.  The rocks skimming, causing ripples to explode like little bombs.  

They did not know there was something strange going on but suddenly out of the mist in the background a stone came skipping back the boy picked up the stone, turning it over.  There was a message carved into the stone, in small thin letters. The message said “I will find you.”   Now at this point they knew that something was wrong.

So they sprinted as fast as possible huffing and puffing, with fear and fiery.  They reached their house slamming the door and locking it behind them, both zooming up to their rooms with terror and locking their door, crying to go to sleep but all the horrible flashbacks  were  coming back into their minds and they kept coming until their end.

Friday, 8 May 2015

Creative Writing - The Stone

The Stone.

By Curtis Tibbles

I am learning to entertain my audience. 

This story is the sequel to The Adventure of the Stone. 

… I saw a stone.  I reached down grabbing the stone in my hand.  My fingers rubbing over the top of the stone as I could feel a strange heat coming from the smooth pebble.  As my eyes looked straight down at this odd rock, as my thumb turned in over in my hand.  

I gasped in terror as I dropped the rock from my grip, letting it fall to the ground.  Had I really seen the writing on the rock? I went down again as the rock lays in front of me. The rock facing down showing me the message once more! I picked up the stone, it said help me I checked the back of the rock It was the same stone I had thrown! I threw it back into the water  but somehow it returned and came back I picked it up again. This time it said it’s me! I was trying to work out who it was, when I saw the shape. It was a person in the distance, on a boat.

I ran back to the house and got a boat from the dark basement. I ran as fast as a cheater and i made it back in time, I rowed so fast on my boat I found the person with ease.

But, this was no person to save! It was a creature with a mask. This mysterious animal had a chain around its neck. We were so petrified we went back to the house and never came back again.

Thursday, 7 May 2015

Creative Writing - Golden Sword

The Golden Sword

By Lukas Van Aken

I am learning to entertain my audience


I will always remember that day I became super rich just because of the golden sword I found at Mysterious Island. When I do I shiver with fear and my heart stops beating.

My name is Bob I am a normal man doing the only thing I love doing, going on a vacation. I was going to Hawaii for a holiday. My friend got me a boat and told me it would take me there without doing anything. So I did a simple thing and went to sleep.

Suddenly I woke up, I was heading into a hurricane and in ten second I was unconscious. I woke up feeling dizzy and drowsy. I found myself on this really random island that was definitely not Hawaii. I  decided to adventure.

I came across this temple that had lots of latin writing all over it . I looked down it, there was a mysterious tunnel. I have a fear of darkness but it was worth conquering my fear, off I went.

As I slowly moved down the narrow path I saw a Massive cobra holding a golden sword in its nest It could of cost a fortune and I really wanted it. I decided to reach for it. I snached it out its nest but I was not prepared for what happened next.

The cobra charged at me I ran out of the cave and started to run up and down and all around until I ran through two trees, yes the cobra got stuck.

I heard a noise, it sounded like a plane. I found a bit of shiney thing that came of my boat in the hurricane and reflected it at the plane still making sure I was holding onto the sword. the plane landed and took me away back home.

I was soon back to my Hometown I became a millionaire  now I live in a Mansion and the whole world knows my name.

Wednesday, 6 May 2015

Creative Writing - Mr Linden's Enchanted Library

Mr Linden's Enchanted Library
By Evelyn Smoldon!

As she strolled into the dusty library she caught a whiff of burning, it smelt like a dragon's breath. She called out, “Hello?...Mr Linden?”. There was a pause of silence then BANG ,”Hello Ingrid” Called Mr Linden “I just got so absorbed in this new book that I forgot I had put some toast in”.
“Anyway what can I help you with?”
“I just came to pick up the book I ordered.”
“Oh yes I have that book somewhere in the back” Mr Linden answered ,
“BUT... I don’t think you should borrow it.
“Well why not? I really need it for tomorrow because we have to a project on creepers.”
“That is exactly why I don’t think you should borrow it.”
“Please Mr Linden just for one day please please please.”
“Fine but don’t say I didn’t warn you.”

You see Mr Linden's library was no ordinary library this is because all the books were magic in a  one way or another, this particular book was dangerous you see when you read it a creeper starts creeping up on you and wraps itself around you,before you can do anything about it.

That evening Ingrid started reading about creepers. She learnt that creepers grow `to about 90 to 120 cms in height. But it was getting very late and Ingrid started to slowly doze off. Then once she was asleep, a strange creek and ...swoosh!  A creeper started to slowly creep up on Ingrid it was coming out of the book. It wound itself around her arm. the creeper started at the finger then wound itself up and around her wrist then her arm.

Ingrid awoke with a start. She had had a horrible dream. She glanced down at her arm and gasped there wound round her arm was a creeper. She struggled and tugged but the creeper just kept winding itself over her shoulder. She kept struggling but the creeper just speed up, it was coming up on her neck she needed to do something and fast. Then something clicked in she stopped struggling and the creeper stopped, then it slowly crumpled up and disintegrated.

As Ingrid was walking to school the next day she quickly popped into the library to return the book. She told Mr Linden that he was right about the book and she would listen to him in future  and be more careful next time…or will she...